Spontaneous Me

Taylor Cole
AP-English
Spontaneous Me
Spontaneous Me is a poem talking about a number of subjects. This male author doesn’t want to be the typical male macho author when it came to writing a love poem. In a way this poem kind of confuses me as to what he is talking about. Though I will say he was very descriptive with whatever he did.
In the beginning it seemed as if he was describing a beautiful day. He described it so well that I wanted to be there myself. He wanted to stay away from the typical male poem, so when it came to love he left out no details. It seemed as if he was describing making love to the love of his life. He talked about the images that popped into his mind while this was going on.
He talked of lots of beautiful things like how every curve of her body was an aspect of love. It showed that he cherished every part of her body and he took none of it for granted. He talked of how he would lay and cuddle with his love and how peaceful and serene it can be. He feels so attached to her.
As he gets into the subject of them parting, the story takes a twist. He begins to get into a negative drone. He speaks of a motherless child and other lonely scenes. This shows how much he is in love with this woman. He is more than mentally and physically attached. It’s almost like he gets depressed just thinking about it. He places a dark image and feeling in your head , for example a dead leaf hitting the ground.
It begins to sound like he can’t live without her. He even sounds as if he wants to start a family with her. He is so deeply in touch with her, my only concern is does she feel the same. He really doesn’t speak of the mutual feelings they have. I wonder if there is a reason for that.